Australian Geographic

KEEP IT SHORT

- IAN BRYCE, ROZELLE, NSW

I enjoy AG’s writing style, which is usually concise while descriptiv­e and accurate; short sentences are good.That was until the feature on Joseph Banks’ Florilegiu­m

(AG 145). One sentence is about 70 words, with 10 clauses woven into a tangled web. Please resist the temptation to keep expanding your sentences.

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