Bad Copy from NCC
WELCOME to this edition: “Senate gives IGP 2 weeks (weeks’) ultimatum” “Jacob, however, prayed for a short adjournment of about a week to enable the agency round up (off) its case.” “A witness that ought to attend court fails to attend court and summons (a summons) has been issued and served on the same witness.”
“Nexus between climate change and herdsmen (herdsmen’s) crisis”
“NCC sensitises (latest trend: sensitizes) stakeholders on (to) broadband, data pricing” This bad copy must have come from the Nigerian Communications Commission (NCC)! Unfortunately, Tech & Gadgets of Daily Sun, January 17, could not detect it.
“Graft: Obiano reads riot act (the riot act) to Anambra officials”
“CHAN 2018: “Eagles‘ll deliver, Yusuf assures” Who did he assure? “This is a true attestation of (to) the confidence the people have in you.” “The failure of our successive governments to institute and implement far reaching (far-reaching) policies to address the problem have (has) encouraged dumping of even sometimes unwholesome goods in our markets….”
“Jubilations (Jubilation) as 400 renounce militancy, surrender weapons in Ondo” (South West Magazine, January 18)
It is not everything that is in the dictionary that is correct at all times because of language dynamism. It is for this reason that the dictionary and other reference books are continually revised. So, don’t go about dogmatically chest-thumping that you have an infallible authority when reacting to etymological issues published in this column. You need to do a lot of research-based rationalization informed by voracious reading if you crave purity in communication. That is the only way to go for sticklers.
“They, in turn, could be able to carry out their legitimate duties to their customers.” Either: could or would be able. ‘Could be able’ is offensive.
“Some people who have axe (an axe) to grind against (with) NIJ and its management.”
“That is one thing that is not so easy to come by at the Ogba campus of the NIJ” Get it right: on the Ogba campus.
“The effort of such illustrious alumni are needed to lift it up from the present morass.” Why the subject-verb discord? Effort is (not are) needed.
“To those close to the corridor (corridors) of power.…”
“Let him breath the air of freedom.” (Vanguard, January 2) Noun: breath; verb: breathe.
“With a stroke of fate, Muhammadu Buhari had been thrust on (in) the leadership saddle of the nation.”
“Rather, we prefer to import the latest from foreign countries, without trying to see whether we can produce better varieties”. Delete ‘from foreign countries’.
“Though successful (successive) governments had at different times urged Nigerians to….”
“…the armed robbers have already gone with their loots”. ‘Loot’ is non-count.
“Nigerians need other people friendly (sic) foundations to join the bandwagon”. Either climb or jump on/aboard the bandwagon.
“Regard the face of our Head of State at formal and informal occasions.” (THE GUARDIAN, January 2) To laugh is human: on (not at) all occasions.
“That shoot-at-sight order in Libya” Get it right: shoot-on-sight order.
“…a constitution designed to ensure peace and stability is this nation’s only antidote against (to) national disintegration.”
“When our prisons are bursting at their seems (seams) with political detainees.…”
“The aversion of Nigerians for (to) military rule is clear and unmistakable.”
“…alleging intimidation and harassments which made fair conduct of elections unattainable.“‘Harassment’ is non-count.
“But I believe in a Nigeria in which what is good for the goose is good for the gander” (Thisday, January 2) What is sauce for the goose.…
”…Nigeria which should be flying with the eagles is roaming about with the chicken” (Source: as above) Always at the brink: delete ‘about’.
“While those with matured (mature) minds were able to control their emotions.…”
“Musicians pay last respect to departed….” Fixed: last respects
“The armed bandits struck at HawanKibo, about 60 kilometres from Jos.” Are there un-armed bandits?
“Members of ANCLA are now working on plans to see that this menace is reduced or wiped out completely.” Yank off ‘completely’ to foreclose lexical insanity.
“The development is sad, pathetic and constitutes a terrible setback on the objective of the party reform.” Get it right: a setback to (not on) the objective.
“Hopefully, we will end up with a human specie (species) that is half-man and half-dog.”
“We must congratulate him for (on/ upon) these, but....”
“Former President of South Africa