Sample essay question

AS PROMISED, we will look today at a sample Module 1 essay question which is the first of the three essay questions you will find on your examination paper.

1. Read the extract below and then answer the questions that follow.

Look at them behind their counters – young, neatly outfitted in their starched fast-food uniforms or their linen and polyester clerk suits. They quickly and effortlessly tap the keys on their cash registers and computers, answer phones, and look quite efficient, don’t they? They seem as if they can think, don’t they? Don’t let the pressed clothes and technology fool you; many of them can’t. Let there be a glitch or a breakdown and then you’ll see what lies beneath the suits and uniforms and beyond the counters - operators of

broken-down cash registers and computers who will fumble to spell and calculate. And you, older than they, will wonder what they spent their primary- and secondary-school years learning.

You can spot them every day, everywhere. Last week, for example, I saw the brain of a young attendant at a fast-food outlet shut down the instant his computer crashed. Before the crash, he had appeared capable as he punched the appropriate keys for the orders. But when he was faced with having to write down what his customers wanted, he could only operate in slow motion. I know because, to my misfortune, I was about to order a tuna sandwich and a large orange juice when the system failed. After a minute or two of trying to spell the two items, he scrunched up the piece of paper and started writing afresh on a second sheet. I was not sure I’d get the correct meal.

Two days after this calamity, I encountered one of Mr. Illiteracy’s pals, a Miss Innumeracy, in a store downtown when I was trying to pay a bill of $26.05 with two twenty-dollar bills. Because of a mix-up, the cash register was closed, and so the young girl had to calculate on paper how much change to give me. After an eternity of scratching her head and calculating on a sheet of paper, she handed me $14.05, but, thanks to my Standard Five teacher, I had already calculated in my head that I should have received $13.95. When I told her so, she seemed mentally paralyzed. Luckily, another suited girl, who looked senior in age and rank, came to her rescue. She whipped out a calculator, pressed a few keys, and, presto, gave me the right change, scolding Miss Innumeracy for her bad math!

I left, thinking sadly that there was nothing I could do to help them make up for the years they had spent in their classrooms not bothering to learn how to read, write, count, or think. Adapted from Suzanne Mills’ Between the Lines. Trinidad and Tobago Newsday, June 2, 2004, p.11.

(a) State the writer’s MAIN point in no more than 30 words. (2 marks)

(b) Write an ESSAY in no more than 500 words in which you include reference to the following:

(i) The writer’s purpose

(ii) Organizational strategies

(iii) Language techniques

(iv) An evaluation of the appropriateness of the tone.

(23 marks)

[Total: 25 marks]