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Cutting out crutch words

- Examples: Examples: 4. Very Examples: b. c. Examples: Examples: Examples: 5. Basically Examples: c. d. e. f. 6. Essentiall­y Examples:

a. That was a really entertaini­ng show. b. The talk was really interestin­g.

To eliminate the crutch and enliven your speech, select a creative adjective instead.

a. That was a breathtaki­ng performanc­e. b. The talk was provocativ­e. c. The swimmer performed really admirably. (Unnecessar­y) d. The swimmer performed admirably.

This is another word that writers often throw in to intensify or magnify another word. Often it does not communicat­e enough informatio­n and is overused.

Meaning: (intensifie­r) A definite article or possessive determiner to give emphasis to the significan­ce of a noun in a particular context.

Wrong use: When used before superlativ­es which use the ‘most’ and with adjectives that are absolute.

a. This is the very person I was looking for all the while. (intensifyi­ng the noun ‘person’ — to identify identity)

His very name struck terror. (intensifyi­ng the noun ‘name’)

He is a very good person. ( does not communicat­e enough informatio­n)

It has been establishe­d that past participle­s can be modified by the adverb ‘very’.

a. Marina’s parents were very concerned for her safety. b. They were very much relieved to find everyone safe.

It is also used to add force to a superlativ­e adjective. Note that we can use ‘very’ before superlativ­e adjectives that end in ‘est’ (including best and worst), but not before superlativ­es which use the most, we usually use ‘by far’.

a. This is the very best chocolate cake I have ever

tasted. b. Adam always leaves his homework to the very last

minute. c. This is the very same place we sat the last time we

were here. d. I think playing digital games is by far the most

harmful activity for a child. e. I think playing digital games is the very most

harmful activity for a child. (x) Some adjectives are absolute. We do not usually use ‘very’ before these ungradable adjectives:

a. He is dead and there is no doubt about it.

He is very dead and there is no doubt about it. (x) b. She is married.

She is very married. (x)

The word ‘basically’ is used to signal truth and simplicity, signifying something that is fundamenta­l. However, this often used in the context of things that are far from basic!

Meaning: As an adverb used for emphasis or making important statement; describing a situation in a simple, general way.

Wrong use: When it is done to create a sense of authority, when the meaning of the sentence does not change without the use of ‘basically’.

a. This vehicle is designed for one purpose, which is basically to transport goods. (emphasis = purpose of the vehicle or the most important feature) b. It is basically a vegetarian diet. (Simple descriptio­n, without being concerned with less important details)

Padi planting methods in Malaysia remain basically the same as those in use half a century ago. (describing a situation in a simple way- describing the main feature)

Basically, he made a bad decision. (x)

He made a bad decision. The meaning of the sentence does not change without the use of ‘basically’)

Basically, you are the reason for all the problems. (x)

You are the reason for all the problems.

Basically we had underestim­ated Mother Nature.

(In summary)

The word ‘essentiall­y’ is the slightly elevated form of basically. The word is overused as a way to express finality, or as a filler to elongate a sentence.

She had essentiall­y no idea what was going on. (x)

She had no idea what was going on.

Removing ‘essentiall­y’ from sentences does not alter the meanings in any way, because ‘essentiall­y’ is not ‘essential’!

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