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When two paths collide

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Two nice, wounded people, unknown to each other, decide to heal themselves by walking 2000km of the Camino Santiago through Spain and France. En route, they find luscious scenery, quaint locals and increasing stirrings as their steps intermitte­ntly converge. Aww, shucks.

There are the usual misconcept­ions at first. He’s a thief? She’s a kook? A spark glows but they’ll probably never see each other again. Aww, gee. Zoe is a California­n artist, therefore impulsive and flaky; look how she references “Leo on the cusp of Virgo”. Martin is a Yorkshire engineer, therefore dour and dogged; look how he fixes a buckled wheel then sees potential income in it.

No, be fair: the authors render their characters more subtly than that, though you know this will be a narrative where the protagonis­ts start off bristling like cats and end up cooing like doves. If I note that the novel’s first word is “Fate”, and that its second sentence uses “laying” wrongly, do I sound picky? I do? Aww, gosh.

Major literature this ain’t but it steps along eagerly, like its walkers, and there’s never a shortage of incidents. Knees wobble, mud clogs, artist Georgia O’Keeffe is discussed, crises flare at home, Martin meets Maarten and Zoe meets tasteless crucifixes. We learn about blisters, hostels, route markers and clothes-drying (hang them from your pack as you walk).

Stretches resemble a sprightly tour itinerary; a lot of local foods and beverages get listed. So do architectu­ral highlights. Clever, sometimes cutesy, dialogue keeps you reading though you need to brace for the aphorisms scattered along the route like loose change. “It is important to know not only what to hold on to and what to let go of but what to go back for.” Aww, cringe.

Two Steps Forward insists on being a story with spiritual significan­ce. People tell one another: “You have a large heart . . . I feel I’ve lost touch with the universe.” They discuss their angst and inner selves with protracted earnestnes­s. If you were walking with them, you might want to hurry on ahead.

You’ll like Zoe and Martin. You’ll enjoy their physical and metaphysic­al odysseys and feel pleased that they’ve laid their ghosts and each other before the mildly sugary ending. But their interminab­le self-analysis weighs on the narrative like Zoe’s pack. Aww, well.

 ??  ?? TWO STEPS FORWARD by Graeme Simsion and Anne Buist (Text Publishing, $37) Reviewed by David Hill
TWO STEPS FORWARD by Graeme Simsion and Anne Buist (Text Publishing, $37) Reviewed by David Hill

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