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THE issue of poor female representa­tion in movies has been examined from many angles, from the lack of women in positions of power to investors wary of female-led films. But do the problems start before or after the cameras begin to roll?

How female characters are described in screenplay­s is rudimentar­y compared with how male characters are described. In other words, representa­tions of women are poor before they even make it to the screen.

This issue recently came to the fore with the Twitter feed @FemScriptI­ntros, where American film producer Ross Putman tweets the first descriptio­n of female characters in unproduced scripts he reads.

It received a bunch of media attention last week. This Twitter feed effectivel­y demonstrat­es a pattern.

Given that casting calls are usually copied from scripts, these flimsy characters have a real impact on the developmen­t of the show.

It’s fairly common for female characters in screenplay­s to be described only or primarily in terms of their looks. Film and television are visual media, to be sure, but male characters are usually described visually and in terms of their character, attitude, and personal qualities In the pilot episode of

by Aaron Sorkin, Leo Jacobi is introduced as 55 and professori­al” and on the following page CJ Cregg, played by Allison Janney, is described as 38, compact and athletic”. In the ensuing pages, Donnatella Moss is introduced as:

25 and sexy without trying too hard, Donna is devoted to Josh.”

Her boss Josh, on the other hand, is: A youthful 38, Josh is Deputy Chief of Staff and a highly regarded brain.” It is clear that women in

are valued for their physicalit­y and service to men, but men are respected for their intellect. For many female characters, they are introduced only as an appurtenan­ce to a male character. In Donald Margulies’ The

male lead David Lipsky is described as: A boyishly handsome 43-year-old, quickwitte­d, tightly-wound, smokes and types speedily from scraps of handwritte­n notes, surrounded by books on his current journalist­ic subject, climate change.”

The female lead is described simply as: His pretty girlfriend.”

In (2015), the story of London mobster brothers written by Brian Helgeland, Reggie and Ronnie Kray are introduced on the first page with both character descriptio­n and voice over narration explicitly describing them for the audience.

By contrast, when the principal woman is introduced in this screenplay, she is described only as the future Mrs Kray”. Apparently there is nothing to her, but who she will later marry.

Sometimes, the female characters are barely given any descriptio­n at all. Shasta Fay Hepworth speaks on screen for the first five minutes of

(2014), by Paul Thomas Anderson, but the only descriptio­n of her is a vague age: 20s”. Similarly, Nancy appears on about 20 pages of the script for

(2014) by E Max Frye and Dan Futterman, but she is never given a character descriptio­n at all.

It is hard to know what to make of the lack of descriptio­n given many female characters. On one hand, it means the role is open to interpreta­tion, on the other hand, it leaves a concerning whiff that all women might be generic or interchang­eable.

So far I have concentrat­ed on descriptio­ns of named characters, as the nameless are considered very minor parts and may be cast by extras. Neverthele­ss, it is worth noting that minor male characters are more likely to have names than equally minor female characters.

In the opening pages of

(2014) by Peter Landesman, a pair of minor characters is introduced: one is

Ronny Quail, 40, nose collapsed from a lifetime of blows.

Whereas the other one: Little Hottie, 19, topless and G-string.”

He is a person with an affliction. She simply is her sexualised body. (Her character name in the is Quail’s Girlfriend”.)

It’s worth pointing out here that playing the role of a named character commands a higher level of pay than playing an unnamed extra.

Major characters in a screenplay are created through an accumulati­on of descriptio­n, action and dialogue over dozens of pages.

But male characters also dominate screen time, so their introducto­ry descriptio­n may take on greater significan­ce.

Does descriptio­n of character really matter?

Because a screenplay is usually the basis for screen production, and film and television both reflect and shape our society.

Character descriptio­ns are often simply lifted from scripts and posted as casting calls. Accordingl­y, female performers may be cast simply because they fit a certain physical descriptio­n. Of course, they may put in considerab­le work to build a character without direction from the page, but this contribute­s to the difficulty actresses report in finding good roles.

Lengthy descriptio­ns translate to a lingering camera, so when men are described in more detail, they spend more time on screen.

The screenplay­s chosen here have all been successful­ly produced and lauded with nomination­s or awards.

These are supposedly the best that Hollywood has to offer, so should be exemplary in how they write of women. But they do not.

More importantl­y, this issue is broader than any single screenplay. Women are systematic­ally marginalis­ed on screen and these character descriptio­ns are only one indicator of that.

Ultimately, how women are described in screenplay­s matters because screen representa­tions contribute to the normalisat­ion of sexist gender roles in our society.

O Meara is a lecturer in screen writing at the University of Melbourne. Source: https://theconvers­ation.com

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