Las Vegas Review-Journal (Sunday)

A haunting portrayal of faith and its dangers

- By Crystal Paul

In her debut novel, “The Incendiari­es,” R.O. Kwon writes the most beautiful depiction of broken Solo cups, the unofficial cup of uninspired college parties, I’ve ever read. When her two protagonis­ts, Will Kendall and Phoebe Lin, meet at a college party, Kwon describes the cups on the ground as “punch-stained red cups split underfoot opening into petals.”

Throughout the novel, Kwon’s writing stuns. It shines in the little details and in-between sentences where you’re least expecting to find yourself lingering over a beautiful phrase. Bouncing rhythmic lines such as “a high-bodied bus listed past, piping exhaust” threaten to take off with the narrative. Others make you stop and bask in them for a while: “the nights melting like ice slivers into one God-struck evening.” I found myself wanting to mine these in-between lines and gather them into a small book of poetry.

If Kwon, like her “Godstruck” characters, has a religion, it’s language.

And thank goodness for that, because the characters in the novel are absolutely infuriatin­g. Will, the primary narrator, replaces his lost faith with an obsessive toxic relationsh­ip with Phoebe. Although the book’s chapters switch between the stories of Will, Phoebe and budding cult leader John “The Incendiari­es” By R.O. Kwon (Riverhead Books, $26) Leal, Phoebe’s chapters are told from Will’s troubling perspectiv­e.

At first, Will gives us a problemati­cally romanticiz­ed Phoebe, the “bleeding, feverish creature (he) didn’t know how to stop wanting.” As distance grows between them, Phoebe’s narrative also begins to loosen itself from Will’s often nauseating perspectiv­e. Phoebe is revealed to be a young-minded woman who has suffered loss and trauma and is flinging herself at anything that might help numb the guilt and pain she feels.

“It’s who I am. I hurt those I love,” she all but quotes from some sort of postadoles­cent angst handbook. Phoebe soon vanishes once again from her own narrative, becoming a shadowy presence behind the shroud of Jejah, the religious cult into which she tries to lose herself and the pain of her traumas. By the end, she exists almost completely in Will’s imaginatio­n.

The cult leader John is also barely a character. His chapters are brief, rarely more than a page long. He appears like an apparition into and out of the story. He feels almost unnecessar­y, except that a cult needs a leader. At best, he is a figurehead for the more powerful driving forces of the story — loss, faith, selfdelusi­on.

These shadow characters put the reader at a distance. While Kwon’s beautiful writing draws you in, Will’s warped perspectiv­e keeps you decidedly outside of this trio of faith-sick characters. This distance reflects the many losses expressed in the novel.

Kwon, having personally experience­d the pull of faith and the devastatio­n of its loss, is gentler with these characters than I could ever be. She does not let her characters off the hook for their detestable behaviors, but she does not villainize them beyond human recognitio­n either. They blow up buildings, manipulate and hurt people. They are troubled and troubling characters, and they are precisely as comprehens­ible and infuriatin­g as they should be.

Despite, or probably because of, these difficult characters, “The Incendiari­es” is a haunting portrayal of faith — its draw, its loss, its dangers. Faith and loss spark against each other in every interactio­n of this novel until, as the title promises, eventually they ignite, and what remains is a mess of human lives altered almost beyond recognitio­n.

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