Paint­ing Cri­tiques

Mal­colm Greig

International Artist - - Workshop -

Re­ally good colour and value re­la­tion­ships in the boat, Mal­colm, and good ef­fort with the wa­ter though there are two points there to im­prove on such as the grey splotches through­out, which could do with re­shap­ing into flat­ter wave forms and mak­ing more blue or blue­green since the grey seems to be stand­ing out be­cause it’s too neu­tral. Also, be care­ful when paint­ing re­flec­tions that they don’t ex­tend hor­i­zon­tally beyond the ver­ti­cal bounds of the ob­ject as in the di­a­gram. The fig­ure could do with some shad­ows. Good ef­fort.

Re­flec­tion Di­a­gram

Richard Robin­son, Sail­ing Away, acrylic on can­vas, 12 x 12" (30 x 30 cm)

Richard Robin­son, Get­ting Ready, acrylic on can­vas, 12 x 12" (30 x 30 cm)

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